01 September 2010

Secret | Sensational Haiku Wednesday

Wednesday, September 01, 2010

Secret HaikuThanks to Jenn for this week's theme

Secret

Come closer, my dear.
I'll whisper to you my heart.
No one else to hear.

~RA

A sign of love | © 2009 by Rosidah Abidin
The meme basics:

Haiku is simple!
It is 3 non-rhyming lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively
(a great way to use your fingers!)


Thanks for every visit and comment.
Keep a song in your heart.

11 appreciated note(s):

Thom said...

Sensational. Your husband is a VERY lucky man. :). Have a great Wednesday. :)

Bloggin'withAmanda said...

Very very sweet Rosidah! You can be so romantic sometimes! Is the picture of flowers Bleeding hearts?
xoxoxoxoxox

Jim said...

Very nice Rosidah. I had thought about a 'mushy' one like yours but opted for my dogs when I found their picture.
Thank you for peeking in on them. :)

Your poem reminded me of an old high school joke. After the little quiet talk promising sweet nothings like your haiku the punch line was "sweet noting, sweet nothing." [I couldn't fit that into five syllables or might have used it anyway.]
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5thsister said...

Oooh la la! Very nice! I like the romantic touch!

juliana said...

very romantic :)

hope you have a great day

quilly said...

Beautiful flower and wonderful words!

Jingle said...

cute Haiku,
u make me wonder.

Jenn @ Youknow...that Blog? said...

That's beautiful! Very very nice Rosidah!

Jingle said...

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Nessa said...

This was a very romantic and intimate haiku.

tasithoughts said...

Very nice.

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