19 April 2010

Prisoner of Heart | Microfiction Monday 27


He turned towards the heavenly sound.
Angels or demons? Evil or bliss?
Blurred visions imprisoned the lost heart.
He had to seek more light.

~ Rosidah Abidin


Thanks to Susan at Stony River

Microfiction Monday where a picture paints 140 characters... or even fewer

Every Sunday evening she posts a photo or illustration, and you compose a story in 140 characters about it on your blog. Thanks for hosting this meme and sharing the image, Susan.

20 comments:

  1. Sylvia KApril 19, 2010 at 7:45 AM

    Ah, one never knows!! Be on the watch for those evil ones! We seem to know a lot of them. Great one for the day, Rosidah! Have a great week!

    Sylvia

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  2. AnonymousApril 19, 2010 at 8:07 AM

    Let's hope it is Angels and bliss and I do hope he finds his heart. Great take on the photo my dear sweet friend. I hope you and the family are well :) xoxoxo

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  3. Bill ~ {The Old Fart}April 19, 2010 at 8:23 AM

    Rosidah ~ This was great, I hope he finds his answer to be a Positive one.

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  4. PeggyApril 19, 2010 at 8:44 AM

    Good or evil...probably need more then light to be able to tell!
    Great take on the picture !
    You are so good at this.

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  5. myletterstoemilyApril 19, 2010 at 9:24 AM

    i loved your story painting. you are
    very good with words.

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  6. Michael G-GApril 19, 2010 at 9:49 AM

    Loved the lyrical quality of your language.

    Have a great week.

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  7. John (@bookdreamer)April 19, 2010 at 12:39 PM

    Sounds like a devil of time to sort it out! I'm still on the lyrical theme. My micro-fiction

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  8. KristineApril 19, 2010 at 12:45 PM

    oh I love this particularly 'Blurred vision imprisoned the lost heart'. So poignant. well done!

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  9. anthonynorthApril 19, 2010 at 2:06 PM

    Great question. We need to know.

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  10. First50April 19, 2010 at 8:07 PM

    Move toward the light! Move toward the light!

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  11. Susan at Stony RiverApril 19, 2010 at 8:14 PM

    Oh boy - so many ways this could go! What a marvellous scene this paints, Rosidah, I loved it!

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  12. UnknownApril 19, 2010 at 8:41 PM

    Sometimes it's hard to tell which direction to take - maybe instinct will help. Or guidance from above!

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  13. UnknownApril 19, 2010 at 10:37 PM

    Good or evil? So confusing! Maybe that light will help.

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  14. GrandmaApril 19, 2010 at 11:56 PM

    Angel or demon. Which did he want? Hope he found the one he was looking for!

    Good take on this pic.

    My MM: The Break

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  15. quillyApril 20, 2010 at 4:15 AM

    Sometimes it is hard to tell devils from angels until it is way too late. The light of God's word always helps.

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  16. hopeApril 20, 2010 at 5:41 AM

    This was interesting..and I ruined it by envisioning Gollum coming up from the depths to figure it out for himself. ;)

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  17. SouthLakesMomApril 20, 2010 at 6:18 AM

    Lots of advice on how he should look! I think looking for the best in everything will surely lead you to the solution.

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  18. UnknownApril 20, 2010 at 1:20 PM

    Great take, Rosidah.
    My grandma always tell me the same thing about hearing stuffs.
    Excellent MM!
    Have you a great week!
    Mine is here
    hugs
    shakira

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  19. AnyaApril 20, 2010 at 3:51 PM

    Love this post :))))
    Interesting and mysterious ;)
    LOL

    Have a wonderful week
    Hugs Anya :)

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  20. julianaApril 21, 2010 at 12:27 AM

    i wonder... no, i hope he found the light he was looking for.
    i love the lyricism and openness of this one.

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Rosidah