01 September 2010

Secret | Sensational Haiku Wednesday


Secret HaikuThanks to Jenn for this week's theme

Secret

Come closer, my dear.
I'll whisper to you my heart.
No one else to hear.

~RA

A sign of love | © 2009 by Rosidah Abidin
The meme basics:

Haiku is simple!
It is 3 non-rhyming lines of 5, 7, and 5 syllables respectively
(a great way to use your fingers!)


Thanks for every visit and comment.
Keep a song in your heart.

11 comments:

  1. Sensational. Your husband is a VERY lucky man. :). Have a great Wednesday. :)

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  2. Very very sweet Rosidah! You can be so romantic sometimes! Is the picture of flowers Bleeding hearts?
    xoxoxoxoxox

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  3. Very nice Rosidah. I had thought about a 'mushy' one like yours but opted for my dogs when I found their picture.
    Thank you for peeking in on them. :)

    Your poem reminded me of an old high school joke. After the little quiet talk promising sweet nothings like your haiku the punch line was "sweet noting, sweet nothing." [I couldn't fit that into five syllables or might have used it anyway.]
    ..

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  4. Oooh la la! Very nice! I like the romantic touch!

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  5. very romantic :)

    hope you have a great day

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  6. Beautiful flower and wonderful words!

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  7. http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/awards-from-the-blogging-universe/the-shower-of-september-awards-enjoy/


    please pick 3 or 4 from my post and share each with 1 to 5 friends...

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  8. This was a very romantic and intimate haiku.

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  9. Very nice.

    I have awards for you.

    JP

    http://wp.me/PfBho-2yG

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How beautiful a day can be
When kindness touches it!

~George Elliston

Thanks for taking your time to read my post and write a comment. Wishing you all the best for a great day :)

Rosidah