19 April 2010

Prisoner of Heart | Microfiction Monday 27

Monday, April 19, 2010

He turned towards the heavenly sound.
Angels or demons? Evil or bliss?
Blurred visions imprisoned the lost heart.
He had to seek more light.

Rosidah Abidin

Thanks to Susan at Stony River

Microfiction Monday where a picture paints 140 characters... or even fewer

Every Sunday evening she posts a photo or illustration, and you compose a story in 140 characters about it on your blog. Thanks for hosting this meme and sharing the image, Susan.

20 appreciated note(s):

Sylvia K said...

Ah, one never knows!! Be on the watch for those evil ones! We seem to know a lot of them. Great one for the day, Rosidah! Have a great week!


Anonymous said...

Let's hope it is Angels and bliss and I do hope he finds his heart. Great take on the photo my dear sweet friend. I hope you and the family are well :) xoxoxo

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Rosidah ~ This was great, I hope he finds his answer to be a Positive one.

Peggy said...

Good or evil...probably need more then light to be able to tell!
Great take on the picture !
You are so good at this.

myletterstoemily said...

i loved your story painting. you are
very good with words.

Michael G-G said...

Loved the lyrical quality of your language.

Have a great week.

John (@bookdreamer) said...

Sounds like a devil of time to sort it out! I'm still on the lyrical theme. My micro-fiction

Kristine said...

oh I love this particularly 'Blurred vision imprisoned the lost heart'. So poignant. well done!

anthonynorth said...

Great question. We need to know.

First50 said...

Move toward the light! Move toward the light!

Susan at Stony River said...

Oh boy - so many ways this could go! What a marvellous scene this paints, Rosidah, I loved it!

Unknown said...

Sometimes it's hard to tell which direction to take - maybe instinct will help. Or guidance from above!

Unknown said...

Good or evil? So confusing! Maybe that light will help.

Grandma said...

Angel or demon. Which did he want? Hope he found the one he was looking for!

Good take on this pic.

My MM: The Break

quilly said...

Sometimes it is hard to tell devils from angels until it is way too late. The light of God's word always helps.

hope said...

This was interesting..and I ruined it by envisioning Gollum coming up from the depths to figure it out for himself. ;)

SouthLakesMom said...

Lots of advice on how he should look! I think looking for the best in everything will surely lead you to the solution.

Unknown said...

Great take, Rosidah.
My grandma always tell me the same thing about hearing stuffs.
Excellent MM!
Have you a great week!
Mine is here

Anya said...

Love this post :))))
Interesting and mysterious ;)

Have a wonderful week
Hugs Anya :)

juliana said...

i wonder... no, i hope he found the light he was looking for.
i love the lyricism and openness of this one.