23 November 2009

The End Of The Rainbow | Microfiction Monday #6

Monday, November 23, 2009
Welcome to Microfiction Monday,
where a picture paints 140 characters...or even fewer.

Microfiction Monday badge

Susan at Stony River Farm hosts Microfiction Monday. Every Sunday evening she posts a photo or illustration, and you compose a story in 140 characters about it on your blog. Click on the button or link above to get further instructions. To help you along she also has posted a link that counts your characters at Design 215. Thanks for hosting this meme, Susan.

Here's this week's picture (Beautiful, isn't it.) and my story

He hid at the end of the rainbow.
All it took was to grab the scarf and she would be his.

It was time. He didn't hesitate.
No fairy. A witch!

This is my first time to join Microfiction Monday. I would love to become better with my words, like a lot of my friends whose blogs I enjoy. Have a wonderful week, everyone :)

30 appreciated note(s):

SouthLakesMom said...

Oh my! Rainbows are getting dangerous!

RA said...

LOL. I sure don't hope so. Thanks for stopping by :)

Anya said...

I love your rainbow
sooooooooo colorful :-)
Have a wonderful day Rosidah !!

(its rain here cats & dogs :(

Nessa said...

I like it. Very nice first story.

Thanksgiving MeMe

Lee said...

Hello Rosida,very interesting....and not to worry, you are doing alright with your compositions, and your eloquence.
Just write from your heart....

By the way, which part of Indonesia are you living?
I have always loved the beautiful Indonesian accent...not to mention ahemmm, the beautiful Indon women, ha ha.
Love the way the women have their hair in a bun and wear their beautiful batiks.

Incidentally, my last date or ha ha, fling before I got handcuffed was with an Indonesian lady I met...and posted about it about 3 months back, titled, 'Romancing a sarong'.

You have a pleasant week and keep well, Lee.

RA said...

@Anya: It is Susan's photo. I only wrote the micro fiction story. Beautiful shot, isn't it. Have a wonderful day too, even if it's raining :).
@Nessa: Thanks for the encouragement.
@Lee: Thanks for the advice. I'm living in West Java. Have a pleasant week and keep well, too.

Barbara H. said...

Uh oh! Poor guy -- what an unpleasant surprise!

Great imaginative take on the photo!

Peggy said...


So nice to meet you ! This is the best part of Microfiction Monday, meeting such talented bloggers!

I was hoping for the fairy results, not a witch. So good!
have a good week!

Melli said...

Oh MY! It does amaze me the different ideas you all come up with from looking at the same picture! And I always thought there were only leprechauns at the end of the rainbow! LOL!

Susan at Stony River said...

Oh wow Rosidah, your ending took me completely by surprise! LOL and that would be just MY luck, the same as his!

Of course I can't help but think it serves him right, for lying in wait that way...it's a great little story!

We've got rainbows here again today; still raining. It never seems to stop.

Anonymous said...

WOOT!!! I'm so glad you decided to join us. This was excellent. I love it. Very clever. Maybe she was a good witch though LOL. Has she been to OZ? LOL. Well done and you do very well with your English. Again I'm glad you joined the fun. These are great to do and absolutely fun!!!

Bill ~ {The Old Fart} said...

Very nicely done, you did great for your first one.

XoXo said...

Sounds fun my friend...you're good at it huh. Now am tired of thinking, I just want photos, hahahah...I could get used to it.

quilly said...

Serves the fellow right for wanting to snatch instead of taking the time to get to know the lady in question!

RA said...

@All: Thanks for all the wonderful comments and encouragements. Have a great day :)
@Pacey: I enjoy both word and photo memes. Still got to work on my words, though ;p.
@Thom: The witches in the opposite stories were always good. Who knows, they could end up happily ever after. LOL.
@Bill: Thanks for the uplifting words :)
@Melli: It was really interesting to read all various micro fictions. I wonder why no leprechauns appeared. LOL
@Susan: You've got beautiful rainbows in Ireland :). I really love the photo.
@Barbara: TY. So nice to have you stopping by :)
@Peggy: Hi! It's so nice to meet you, too. I always love new friends :). Have a good week, too.

hope said...

Oh just tell me it wasn't Glenda the Good Witch. I swear her voice was creepier than the sight of flying monkeys!

See how much fun this can be? And you did great! See you next Monday.

Dr.John said...

I think you did a great job. Some day I may try this one.

Blackswan said...

Hey Rosidah, love your new "look"! Brightens every blue Monday :)

RA said...

@Quilly: You and me and Susan are on the same page here. Where are all those gentlemen in Fairyland? Probably taken ;)
@Hope: Thanks, Hope. I had great fun :). Now, I must listen to Glenda's voice again... or better not. LOL
@Dr.John: I hope you do, Dr.John. It's so good to see you on my blog :)

RA said...

Hi Shirley, I'm glad you like it. Thanks for stopping by. Have a wonderful week, my dear :)

Jama said...

You're very imaginative with good words, something which always elude me! I'll just stick with just photo meme.
Selamat menyambut Eidil Adha.

RA said...

TY, Jama. You are so good at these photo memes. Have a wonderful holiday :)

Naz said...

Rosidah! Rosidah! Rosidah! ArgghhH!!! <--- your fans screaming. er..

What a lovely rainbow and great story! I hope everything is ok with you. Have a wonderful week my friend. God bless you. =)

Jientje said...

Verywell done Rosidah, loved every word of it!

RA said...

My friend Keats left this comment:
Lovely play there.You did great! And such imagination too :). I must have hit the wrong button and deleted it by mistake.

@Keats: I'm so sorry. Thank you so much, my dear :)

RA said...

@Naz: LOL. I hope everything is ok with you, too. Thank you so much for your help. I'm now thinking what I will display under my posts. Pfft, I just can't get enough ;). Have a wonderful week. God bless you, my friend.
@Jientje: TY. It's so nice to have you on my blog again :)

Martha@SeasideSimplicity said...

It's absolutely gorgeous Rosidah!

RA said...

TY :). The photo belongs to Susan at Stony River. I only wrote the microfiction. Have a wonderful day, Martha.

��Radio Mihalis Thalassis - Athens Greece said...

Morning, always good spirits and health.
Michael. halkida greek

RA said...

Morning :). It's so good to have you back on my blog. Wishing you good spirits and health as well, Michael.