Thanks for the invite to our host Jingle
CASTLE OF LOVE
Blinded through desire
Beaten by race of time
Deaf to the pace of serenity
Moments fade away to rush
Spirits behold of silence
As sun sets on sphere each day
Seek rest within fortress of soul
Find love, find a way home
~RA
Image: Sunset at my home
I don't create poetry, I create myself,
for me my poems are a way to me.
~Edith Södergran
Image: Sunset at my homeI don't create poetry, I create myself,
for me my poems are a way to me.
~Edith Södergran
Keep a poem in your heart.
24 appreciated note(s):
I am thrilled to have you in...
what beautiful blog u have here,
Cheers!
love your words,
they are masterful and fun!
Pure delight my friend. This poem speaks volumes. :)
Very beautiful...loved the sunset!!
Rosidah I have only recently seen a new side to you through your Haiku. Now free verse and an extension of that side expands. This was very lovely, the last verse really got me!
I'm in love with this poem! Wonderfully done!
What I liked about this poem is the way the words slide so evenly into each other at each line. The brevity does not take away from the poem. I believe it enhances the beauty.
Very very beautifully written, Rosida... In today's rat race, finding love is indeed like finding a place to live.. in someone's heart...
The title, words, and image are just perfect!!!
I enjoyed you poem and love the fact that Jingle's Poets Rally introduces us to other poets from many places. Thank you. Victoria
A great read and breathtaking vista, thank you!
Love is never far away. it is in your heart and your heart is your home. I enjoyed this poem. thank you
find love.. find a way home.. i couldn't have put it better myself if i tried :)
love it.. well said, and love the name of ur blog too :D
my entry for the rally is The Butterfly Lover :)
lovely poem and photo :)
The last lines touched my heart with their simple and positive message! I liked seeing your house with the poem. It connects beautifully! I think that was the point of this lovely poem. :-)
This is a very beautiful idea and so well put.
Wonderful poem, i love sunset too :)
Happy Rally :)
Have a great day!
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it reminds me of my home,,
:'(
nice poem by the way!
Beautiful, simply beautiful! I think we all spend a lifetime trying to find love and find a way home...I really hope we all do :)
love the way you ended it..
loved the piece...Find love, find a way home-- such a beautiful insightful line...
delightful read.
keep it up:)
viva la vida :)
I give you the coveted Jingle Award for Best Weekly Photo this week! You can pick it up at http://ibrewhaiku.blogspot.com/2010/08/jingle-awards.html
Enjoy!
Great poem, enjoyed the read and thanks for sharing.
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Rally week 28 will be on September 9,
welcome then
awards for you,
check out other stuff there. it is an old post, u may already saw it, but in case you did not know, welcome to explore…
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